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    Katitude

    Mythical
    Katitude
    Katitude Katitude
    I had to create a "spark" for my audience during my English glass, an intro hook to catch the readers' attention. I decided to whip up a twenty minute poem hoping to share it to y'all. Feedback and comments is much appreciated. ^v^

    "A Different World"

    Reflection brings the tears to my sleeve
    The lines of recollection is nothing of a lie
    The haunting memories mock everything I am
    I've been stabbed a thousand times, and the bottle is there to aid me from giving away to what has drained me of being sane


    From the bruises to the scars
    To my idol with a nasty hobby
    To everyone who claims they're sorry
    You are harming more than just my body

    Their devilish words pierce my heart
    The cries from my reminiscence play in my mind on repeat
    I've heard too many condolences
    My mind is swelling before me

    They glance at my arms and start to judge
    Not from infliction, but from society's contradiction
    People are all alike in ways, yet I feel so apart
    I feel obsolete, and my mind is never at ease

    On a lonely day, I started to fray
    My body was craving what I have slowly lost each day
    Should I even be here, should I even stay
    Then I met the drink, and I enjoyed the clinks

    The horrors still lived within me, though my new friend kept me from contemplation
    He travelled through my body, numbing everything
    I forgot the past, and slaved away each day

    The temporary cure only lasted a while
    Then the coils started to unwire
    The more I drank, the more I sank
    And the hospital bed soon hugged me

    It is hard to let go, as it is to hold on
    Longing for the happiness, it is yet to be discovered
    The pessimism and sorrow must be treated with a difficult process
    And I must commit and find myself for if I don't, it will be only but the death of me

    ~Katitude
     
    Tactical_Fox48
    Tactical_Fox48 Tactical_Fox48
    It's pretty late where I am at the time of posting this, so I'm pretty tired. However, I'm glad I decided to read this poem now, it'll give me a bit to think about as I drift off to sleep... :p
     

    ArmenTheHeli

    Titan
    MemenTheMeme
    MemenTheMeme MemenTheMeme
    it's like my life but replace drinking with dying inside. anyways your poems are great kat! keep up the good work! I also had to make a hook for an essay recently :p
     

    StephenPeters

    Mythical
    xEmilia
    xEmilia xEmilia
    kat you should start a poetry contest here...I said you should "start" instead of "participate" because you're gonna beat everybody if you are actually in a contest :p