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    Katitude

    Mythical
    Katitude
    Katitude Katitude
    I hope you enjoy my poem, feel free to leave feedback in the comments below. :p

    An Unfortunate Winter's Day

    The brittle air struck my nose with an icy winter effect
    The crystals shaped my eyes and my lashes turned white
    I managed to form clouds of perfection as I watched the breath escape my mouth and drift into the air
    My now exhilaratingly numb body brought me dumbfounded as I rested in the heap of white dust

    The snow under me was so light, it rose from the ground
    My vision caught a somewhat distinct object under my delirious state
    Dim lamp posts stood by the ice rink of a road from which I groped offside
    The car was the brightest of the setting, yet stood camouflaged from the desolate area

    I reckoned snow was filled of joy and wonders
    I recall at the age of five, my imagination was wild
    Snowmen came to life at my extent
    Snow angels were as magnificent as bride gowns

    From the time of contemplation in my bed of weariness
    My attempt to stand and venture to a hospital failed ever so greatly
    My limp body fell like spaghetti the moment I took a step
    I remained cradled in the freezing snow wondering if anyone would know

    The numbness shot through my body at last
    A cocoon of frost gently slid over my body
    Winter brings me confusion, how it goes from a car ride with magical stories to being swallowed in the land
    My frozen eyes locked onto the trees, and after a slight snow breeze, I was asleep
     

    PAVLOVA24

    Titan
    PAVLOVA24
    PAVLOVA24 PAVLOVA24
    hey Katitude, do you know when the new tmd map will be out. (not the /map one). If so will the server restart, will all players lose their gear, loot, money, ranks?
     

    Katitude

    Mythical
    Katitude
    Katitude Katitude
    hey Katitude, do you know when the new tmd map will be out. (not the /map one). If so will the server restart, will all players lose their gear, loot, money, ranks?
    I'm not sure, though an update will most likely be given on the forums when the new map comes out. :)
     
    Tactical_Fox48
    Tactical_Fox48 Tactical_Fox48
    It seemed so light hearted and carefree, but the ending...

    Did you realize how tragic the ending had become?




    Also, that was a really "cool" poem! *buh dum, tssh* :D
     

    Katitude

    Mythical
    Katitude
    Katitude Katitude
    Lol yes it was tragic in the ending. I decided she should have hypothermia and die from it because half the time in life, there are no happy endings. Mystical yet realistic, depressing yet causes many to ponder, a perfect mood for a poem. :)
     
    Tactical_Fox48
    Tactical_Fox48 Tactical_Fox48
    Lol yes it was tragic in the ending. I decided she should have hypothermia and die from it because half the time in life, there are no happy endings. Mystical yet realistic, depressing yet causes many to ponder, a perfect mood for a poem. :)
    Mystical... That pretty much sums up this poem :)