Off Topic Poem :)

[Katitude]

This is a random poem I made on Thursday April 7th, 2016. Constructive feedback is optional as long as the negativity is left out. (Thank you for the time taken to read this. )

Bombs are going off
I’m in the field
I capitulate and can’t help but think one thing
Holding on does more damage than letting go

I’m pushed in the mud
I can’t run nor rest
I feel like maybe this is the best
The opportunity is here, no time to think

Inhale slowly, no time to cry
The more I stay alive the more I die inside
Try to exhale but tears burn down my face
My eyes are swollen, why can’t I be erased

I look in the mirror to my true identity
Please remove all my erring and wrong entities
I’ve fought back the bad but the bad bites back
Billowing beyond me, my brain exploding and my mind collapsing on me

Far in time, I’m still in that rough patch
After hours in time I’ve been unlatched
I’ve given a hand and a smile, apparently it’s been there a while
I chose to grab it, was it worth it

Three hours of sleep and I can see
I won’t die in vain, it won’t happen to me
I don’t have to be free to kill what’s trying to get me
I need to stay calm, ready and steady

All I wanted was for the light to reach me
But god knew I wasn’t weak, he gave me the eyes to see
By looking past my fears and standing up straight
That will determine who I am and what I can do
It will determine my fate

~Katitude

 

[YowaYT]

Nice! Never read poems but, this one was pretty nice.

 

[Beetley]

This is really good
You should definitely post another.

 

[Reezy0]

That was an enjoyable read, well done, keep it up!

 

[DamTin]

More please !

 

[Neugs]

I am so proud :-: jk but good job keep it up

 

[The7thCpt]

Found the new Shakespeare

 

[Katitude]

Thank you.

 

[kaikea]

You have written this poem very well, Katitude. You are a very literate person, and I am glad to have seen these types of qualities in a staff member such as you in a server I like to play on all the time. Props, and I hope to see more works written by your creative mind, Kat.

 

[BenSmart112]

You're good at poetry.