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    Katitude

    Mythical
    Katitude
    Katitude Katitude
    Hello HavocMC!

    From time to time, I adore creating poems and sharing it among you wonderful individuals.
    To be fair, we should make an off topic section again but anyways, here it is. ^v^


    Deep inside, I'm a living death
    Portrayed by my needs, and not by my deeds
    Deep inside, I'm a wretched wreck
    Wishing for an awl to pierce my skull
    For the person I am, sanity is just out of grasp

    Deep inside, I scream, along with the nightmares, uncontrollably
    The pain is more than sticks and stones can do
    Deep inside, I'm pressurized
    Bleeding, and greeting the reign of one who's vanity backlashes dignity
    For the person I am, the ocean waves away sanity

    Deep inside, I've realized the lies
    It's more than internal, but an outcome to one that was once an honoured presence
    Deep inside, morals aren't based on you as it's only about the high monarchy
    Authorize the slavery upon your soul and call it proper
    For the person I am, there was never an honest democracy that proposes a healthy life

    Deep inside, animation is a need
    Must we drag along like zombies
    Deep inside, unstitch your mouth
    And preach what has been a necessity for ages
    For the person I am, I won't be covered in such bubonic results

    Deep inside, I shall trash the blanket of demise
    The inexorable jail cell was only by my doing of another's evil faculty
    Deep inside, I will restore the limp individual I am, and redeem my abilities
    Abide the monarch in their poisonous throne and escape to a mellow society
    For the person I am, suppose I become lost by false perception and telling her "I love you"


    ~Katarina

    Please leave your feedback in the comments below, with respect of course. ^w^
    Also, I'm aware the mood of this poem isn't the happiest though the intention is the quality of the overall poem and its mood, so I'm hoping it won't be slandered by the mood. ;)
     

    ArmenTheHeli

    Titan
    MemenTheMeme
    MemenTheMeme MemenTheMeme
    Hello HavocMC!

    From time to time, I adore creating poems and sharing it among you wonderful individuals.
    To be fair, we should make an off topic section again but anyways, here it is. ^v^


    Deep inside, I'm a living death
    Portrayed by my needs, and not by my deeds
    Deep inside, I'm a wretched wreck
    Wishing for an awl to pierce my skull
    For the person I am, sanity is just out of grasp

    Deep inside, I scream, along with the nightmares, uncontrollably
    The pain is more than sticks and stones can do
    Deep inside, I'm pressurized
    Bleeding, and greeting the reign of one who's vanity backlashes dignity
    For the person I am, the ocean waves away sanity

    Deep inside, I've realized the lies
    It's more than internal, but an outcome to one that was once an honoured presence
    Deep inside, morals aren't based on you as it's only about the high monarchy
    Authorize the slavery upon your soul and call it proper
    For the person I am, there was never an honest democracy that proposes a healthy life

    Deep inside, animation is a need
    Must we drag along like zombies
    Deep inside, unstitch your mouth
    And preach what has been a necessity for ages
    For the person I am, I won't be covered in such bubonic results

    Deep inside, I shall trash the blanket of demise
    The inexorable jail cell was only by my doing of another's evil faculty
    Deep inside, I will restore the limp individual I am, and redeem my abilities
    Abide the monarch in their poisonous throne and escape to a mellow society
    For the person I am, suppose I become lost by false perception and telling her "I love you"


    ~Katarina

    Please leave your feedback in the comments below, with respect of course. ^w^
    Also, I'm aware the mood of this poem isn't the happiest though the intention is the quality of the overall poem and its mood, so I'm hoping it won't be slandered by the mood. ;)
    ;-; Beautiful! and I'm glad someone agrees with my "off topic" section :p I could attempt to write a poem, but I don't know anything about structure of poems