Poetry, since Kat did some

[purrr]

I wish everything was okay.
I wish
I
was
happy.
I wish I got the perfect grades.
I wish I had the friends you have.
I wish I didn't bother, knowing that I would screw it up.
I wish I had listened to myself.

Maybe then
We would still be friends

Maybe then
I would be okay enough to keep going- to want to keep going

Maybe then
I wouldn't want to end my life to escape the responsibilities of my future

I tried
I failed
It's gone.

What felt like a warm stone in my hand before I had ruined it has morphed into an amalgamated mush of emotion.

I'm so sorry I bothered.

I shouldn't have.
It's not you.
It would never be you.
You didn't cause this.

The school
The pressure
The stress
The overbearing knowing that you'll have to do better than your parents did.

the knowing that the person you told everything, you can't tell anymore.

Because they're not there.

because of my own ignorance, my own over-confidence induced hope, I thought that maybe it would work out.

An infinite amount of paths it took, with one being the one I desired.

I knew the odds. I knew that beyond all odds, maybe something will work.

Maybe a miracle would happen.
That's what I thought.

Now I've lost you.

After all these years.
because I wanted to be something more than friends

and I ruined it.

Everything is gone.

And I destroyed the one person that made everything.

 

[Sleep__Away]

After a long day of learning to analyze poetry in school, your creation have made my day better

 

[Sleep__Away]

After a long day of learning to analyze poetry in school, your creation have made my day better

I meant it in a good way.

 

[purrr]

I meant it in a good way.

good.

 

[_Tachi_]

This poetry defines how I feel at schoool every day

 

[mrsteve_0914]

Touching...you made a stone man somewhat mellow. (aka me)

 

[StephenPeters]

This poetry reflects my life. *Cries*

 

[DDENGAR]

Sound a lot like one of those rape victim poetry but, man it's pretty good...at you didn't add drinking bleach and doing stupid things like self-inflicting pain/drugs.

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

Sound a lot like one of those rape victim poetry but, man it's pretty good...at you didn't add drinking bleach and doing stupid things like self-inflicting pain/drugs.

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erm bleach tastes bad my dude XD

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

I wish everything was okay.
I wish
I
was
happy.
I wish I got the perfect grades.
I wish I had the friends you have.
I wish I didn't bother, knowing that I would screw it up.
I wish I had listened to myself.

Maybe then
We would still be friends

Maybe then
I would be okay enough to keep going- to want to keep going

Maybe then
I wouldn't want to end my life to escape the responsibilities of my future

I tried
I failed
It's gone.

What felt like a warm stone in my hand before I had ruined it has morphed into an amalgamated mush of emotion.

I'm so sorry I bothered.

I shouldn't have.
It's not you.
It would never be you.
You didn't cause this.

The school
The pressure
The stress
The overbearing knowing that you'll have to do better than your parents did.

the knowing that the person you told everything, you can't tell anymore.

Because they're not there.

because of my own ignorance, my own over-confidence induced hope, I thought that maybe it would work out.

An infinite amount of paths it took, with one being the one I desired.

I knew the odds. I knew that beyond all odds, maybe something will work.

Maybe a miracle would happen.
That's what I thought.

Now I've lost you.

After all these years.
because I wanted to be something more than friends

and I ruined it.

Everything is gone.

And I destroyed the one person that made everything.

is my life, but I have nobody that I could write a sad poem about losing. can't lose what isnt there/ never exited

 

[Katitude]

I think the theme is inspiring, though I have some feedback! A stanza is four lines, sort of like a paragraph and that would definitely help with the formatting. I had to re-read it to discover the main theme but nonetheless it was great and I enjoyed reading. Keep up the amazing work!

 

[purrr]

I think the theme is inspiring, though I have some feedback! A stanza is four lines, sort of like a paragraph and that would definitely help with the formatting. I had to re-read it to discover the main theme but nonetheless it was great and I enjoyed reading. Keep up the amazing work!

Kat gets the theme yeehaw

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

Kat gets the theme yeehaw

I got the theme fam. is my life the theme?

 

[purrr]

I got the theme fam. is my life the theme?

nope its pretty specific keep guessing

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

nope its pretty specific keep guessing

is about how you lost the person you liked and she didn't like you back (you told someone in chat, and I was just kinda lurking around where you guys were camping watching your local chat...)

 

[purrr]

is about how you lost the person you liked and she didn't like you back (you told someone in chat, and I was just kinda lurking around where you guys were camping watching your local chat...)

you're getting closer but fuzzy with the details


dont stalk me pls

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

you're getting closer but fuzzy with the details


dont stalk me pls

I swear I wasn't stalking I was just hiding in basement of cdc and you guys walked in. worst part is you were outside the door I was in but never opened it XD

 

[purrr]

I swear I wasn't stalking I was just hiding in basement of cdc and you guys walked in. worst part is you were outside the door I was in but never opened it XD

keep trying with this its fairly fun i would assume

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

keep trying with this its fairly fun i would assume

I was just so done that I removed my armor, threw all my items on the ground, placed my land mine, and blew it all (and myself) up because I knew I would just be an easy kill
#NoLoot4U XD

 

[purrr]

I was just so done that I removed my armor, threw all my items on the ground, placed my land mine, and blew it all (and myself) up because I knew I would just be an easy kill
#NoLoot4U XD

who wouldve wanted it anyways
#rekt