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    Perflexing

    Champion
    Perflexing
    Perflexing Perflexing
    jack and jill
    went up the hill
    to buy some illegal pills
    just for the thrill
    but ended up getting shrill
    from a guy named bill
    who liked to chill
    with his moonshine still
    at the local windmill
    there was also phil
    and his brother will
    who were mentally ill
    so they decided to kill...kill...kill
    Nice poem. Do you know the song, Chill Bill? ;D

    (I love that song)
     

    Burty_Boy

    Mythical
    Burty_Boy
    Burty_Boy Burty_Boy
    Not sure if it's to late to enter or not, but here's mine:

    Love
    Love is real, as real as real gets
    It's not something you gamble on, you don't place bets
    It's supposed to be an affection toward another
    (Not including your sister or brother)
    It has to be someone you'll depend on for the rest of your life,
    Not someone you know will put you through pain and strife
    It needs to be someone who will care for you, but in return you'll do the same too,
    It's someone you've known and can trust, otherwise the love may harden, and turn to rust
    That's when it gets delicate, fragile if you will
    It makes someone say things, while the other just stands still.
    Not to long after the love is ruined, maybe for the best.
    You think I'll find someone better than the rest,
    But then, you sit, you think, is it really done?
    After everything we had been through, was the love truly gone?
    You'll sit and ponder for weeks on end
    And keep thinking to yourself should I just stay a friend?
    Then it's back, a quick little spark starts your whole heart,
    And the love returns, and will never be torn apart.

    Just wrote it on the spur of the moment :D
     

    Knightas

    Legend
    Knightas
    Knightas Knightas
    Okay, guys, I know we all want 400k on TMD, so here's how you can win it. It's easy simple and won't take that long unless your unimaginative and rubbish at poetry and even then I still want to see it :).

    Okay to Win you must write a poem, on anything, doesn't matter how long, as long as it's not offensive or involved foul language.
    So the player who writes my favourite poem, (I will be fairly judging the poems, and the poem which I like best will win) will receive 400k on TMD, paid by yours truly :)
    I will start with 2 poems to inspire you or give an example, don't doubt one's ability because if you don't try you'll never win.
    WARNING: PLAGIARISM DOES NOT COUNT
    (PS. Laughing, taking the mick out of another players poem is mean, unconstructive and impolite, please be encouraging to anyone who enters. If anyone enters) :) Good Luck Here goes nothing: (My humility goes down the drain)

    Poem 1: Broken

    Once Upon a time I used to Dance,
    Now all I seem to bring myself to do is glance,
    I stare from the other side of the room,
    Watching as their relationship begins to bloom,
    I stare back at my past
    And never would I have guessed we wouldn’t last,
    It hurts when I look in the mirror,
    As I see my life so much clearer,
    I look to the future,
    And all I can see is a broken picture.

    Poem 2: Unrequited
    I look at him from afar, I know him quite well,
    Though, for all he cares, I can go to hell,
    Loving him was like loving no one,
    For all he cares I was outdone,
    Her name is Grace, and she’s well off,
    I’m stuck over here, and I may as well live in a trough,
    Loving him was like loving empty space,
    I love at too much of a pace,
    Love is painful,
    It’s too much of a mouthful,
    To express one's love so innocently,
    To be let down so bluntly,
    Love taught me to lie,
    And life taught me to die,
    But I know deep inside,
    That I have already cried.
    For our love has always been unrequited.


    You Only need to post ONE poem to enter though you are allowed multiple entries if you wish to do so :) If I cannot decide on a poem I will put a poll up for you guys to vote :)
    When will we hear the winners of the poem?? I forgot to ask?
     

    _Renesme

    Titan
    _Renesme
    _Renesme _Renesme
    Ladies and Gentleman! Zombies, half-breeds and whomever else may read this. I have decided at long last, after careful consideration a winner.
    I'd like to congratulate everybody who entered, you managed to write a poem or 2 in some people's cases. There were some... unique poems. Some poems that I really enjoyed, not gonna lie I rolled my eyes at least one, not going to mention any names though :)

    Anyway, I don't think you care about anything I've said prior to this, you here, reading this because you want to know who won.

    Well Congratulations too.......

    BURTGAMING!!!!
    With his/her lovely poem: Love (Spelling and grammar corrected by KateBeckett) :) JK, there were not many mistakes I had to correct :) to -> too and a few commas :) Enjoy and congratulations. Msg me (in game or on forums) about receiving your prize

    Love is real, as real as real gets
    It's not something you gamble on, you don't place bets
    It's supposed to be an affection toward another
    Not including your sister or brother
    It has to be someone you'll depend on for the rest of your life,
    Not someone you know will put you through pain and strife
    It needs to be someone who will care for you, but in return, you'll do the same too,
    It's someone you've known and can trust, otherwise, the love may harden, and turn to rust
    That's when it gets delicate, fragile if you will
    It makes someone say things, while the other just stands still.
    Not too long after the love is ruined, maybe for the best.
    You think I'll find someone better than the rest,
    But then, you sit, you think, is it really done?
    After everything we had been through, was the love truly gone?
    You'll sit and ponder for weeks on end
    And keep thinking to yourself should I just stay a friend?
    Then it's back, a quick little spark starts your whole heart,
    And the love returns, and will never be torn apart.
     

    ArmenTheHeli

    Titan
    MemenTheMeme
    MemenTheMeme MemenTheMeme
    Contest is over, but I'm gonna make one anyways. This is about some troops who barricaded themselves in a small bunker during a war. Enjoy

    Despair fills the room
    We can feel the gloom
    A war wages outside
    We are broken inside
    Can't get up, can't fight
    Can't show the enemies our bite
    A flame once ignited
    Burns cold, absence of light

    A week, a month, a year
    How long have we been trapped in here?
    Can't leave, can't stay
    Gotta gather up courage,escape today
    All is silent, no more gunshots
    Remove the barricade, made of rocks
    Leaving our shelter go out to the war zone
    But our exit is quickly postponed

    The world is ablaze, nobody alive in sight
    Can't tell which side won the fight
    Lifeess , hollow.
    Death toll to large to swallow.
    Memories burn into the heads of everyone.
    The stories of war, they tell to their little ones.
    Terrifying, cruel.
    Against death, they duel.

    Trudge back to the base, to get out of here.
    The thoughts fill the silence
    Nobody thought of this.
    What happens when nobody wins?

    In war, only the survivors win.
     

    _Renesme

    Titan
    _Renesme
    _Renesme _Renesme
    Contest is over, but I'm gonna make one anyways. This is about some troops who barricaded themselves in a small bunker during a war. Enjoy

    Despair fills the room
    We can feel the gloom
    A war wages outside
    We are broken inside
    Can't get up, can't fight
    Can't show the enemies our bite
    A flame once ignited
    Burns cold, absence of light

    A week, a month, a year
    How long have we been trapped in here?
    Can't leave, can't stay
    Gotta gather up courage,escape today
    All is silent, no more gunshots
    Remove the barricade, made of rocks
    Leaving our shelter go out to the war zone
    But our exit is quickly postponed

    The world is ablaze, nobody alive in sight
    Can't tell which side won the fight
    Lifeess , hollow.
    Death toll to large to swallow.
    Memories burn into the heads of everyone.
    The stories of war, they tell to their little ones.
    Terrifying, cruel.
    Against death, they duel.

    Trudge back to the base, to get out of here.
    The thoughts fill the silence
    Nobody thought of this.
    What happens when nobody wins?

    In war, only the survivors win.

    Lovely poem ArmenTheHeli!