My story

[Sarge4id]

If you'd like, I could be your editor and advisor for this story. I'll do the formatting for it, and also supply some ideas. Also, it does matter when and where they go to sleep. Not only does sleeping provide an opportunity for a potential threat, the lack of sleep also provides a potential threat as the character(s) might not be fully alert.

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

If you'd like, I could be your editor and advisor for this story. I'll do the formatting for it, and also supply some ideas. Also, it does matter when and where they go to sleep. Not only does sleeping provide an opportunity for a potential threat, the lack of sleep also provides a potential threat as the character(s) might not be fully alert.

Erm since Sarge went inactive I can do your editing.

 

[likebeingawesome]

Erm since Sarge went inactive I can do your editing.

THX I have at least 4 finished chapters that need editing

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

THX I have at least 4 finished chapters that need editing

Send them to me in a private msg

 

[likebeingawesome]

Send them to me in a private msg

Do u have google docs that would be a little easyer to use (I would need to talk to my parents through) but in the mean time I will PM chapter 2

 

[ArmenTheHeli]

Do u have google docs that would be a little easyer to use (I would need to talk to my parents through) but in the mean time I will PM chapter 2

yeah I have google docs